Comments thread for 'Games people play'

[death2Uall]

This is, so far, an excellent little story you two are playing.  Kudos to both of you. 

Personally I have no problem watching the plot slowly thicken ... but I must admit I was glad to see at least one forced sexual encounter develop by page four.  That is, after all, what the site's about.

Besides, CT's avatar makes me want to tie her up and grope her repeatedly.  At least.  I don't know how Max or the Judge can manage to keep their hands off her.

;)

The mindfuck of making Simone think she's playing against another kidnap victim, then slowly revealing that Max has special privileges ... particularly regarding her ... and that there must be a reason he has those special privileges has been exceptionally well done.  I look forward to seeing what happens when she finally figures it out beyond any doubt.

Nice work, guys.  I'll be sure to keep reading as long as you keep writing.

[Sprayman]

Thanks for the kind words Death.

The Judge had his hands on Simone before the second page. Remember - he was the one that stripped her and put the collar on her. Knowing the Judge as well as I do, (It's a close personal relationship - lol) His hands weren't in his pockets all that time. Simone just doesn't remember it. It was recorded though, and may be revelled at some point. The Judge is shy and stays behind the scenes most of the time.

Max had a *hard* time keeping his hands off but the game is changing now and his time is coming closer and closer. Right now, he is throat fucking Cam, the little Vietnamese slave girl. She's leaving the story soon though and Simone is the next likely victim.

Thanks again for the comments - CT will likely have a word or two about you wanting to grope her avatar!

[Chocolate Thai]

Death, thank you for your comments! I'm glad you're enjoying  the RP so far, I know I am. I never know what Max has in store up his sleeve (or down his pants) for poor Simone. Mind fuckery is always awesome and Spray is a pro at it.

Now...about that groping comment... let's explore that train of thought further... Hurry up and IM me and let me know all the filthy, nasty, dirty little things you'd like to do to me to make me scream...

[death2Uall]

I'm not sure I like the current "instant suggestion" or "instant hypnosis" ability Max seems to have acquired.  There was no prior hint that this might be an MC story, and frankly without some kind of prior warning this just seems like a desperate attempt on Spray's part to keep control of the story.

However, since Sprayman, as both dominant parties in the story, has always been in control, I can't say I can see a rationale for introducing this ability without some prior warning that it would appear.  If you didn't plan on this ability before you started, you shouldn't have included it. If you DID, you should have warned us that this was a MC story.  But whether you planned it from the beginning or not, you have GOT to provide a rationale for it, a reason for Max's having this uncanny ability, and now.  Remember that even hypnotists can't get people to do things they'd be otherwise unwilling to do, and you've done just that.

I don't know if this kind of control was something you arranged with CT ahead of time or not.  If so, you should have given some hint of it in the story before now.  If not, I hope Simone reaches back, fondles Max's testicles lovingly and tenderly, and then ... crushes them between her fingers, thumb and palm.  After all, crushed testes are only a "temporary disability" as far as any physical or mental competition might be construed (i.e., within the rules), and it might provide a permanent psychological advantage for her.  Max might be able to kill her, but that would be unlikely while he's cupping his balls in agony, and would make any further televised competition impossible . . . which is obviously NOT what "the Judge" wants.

Don't think I'm hoping for Simone's eventual victory; I'm not.  I may also be thinking too much like an author and not enough like a roleplayer, but this "deus ex machina" control you've suddenly established over Simone is cheap and sleazy.  If I was running a D&D game, I wouldn't allow it, much less indulge in it.  What needs ... needs ... to happen now is that Simone has to teach Max that he can not employ his "talents" without consequences, i.e. without harm to himself.

Then, whether he decides to kill her AFTER the competition or not, it can continue (with his many advantages) without this bullshit ability getting in the way.  Because as it stands now, this is a MC story, not a competition or slavery story, and you haven't properly set it up, and it isn't very satisfying to anybody who reads it.

[Sprayman]

Duly noted Death - and sorry you're no longer happy with the story/RP.

CT and I are having fun with it - and that was our only real plan.

There was no 'prior hint' that Simone had gymnastic ability either. Some things just happen.

As for her grabbing and crushing Max's balls - that would have to be CT's decision.

Anyway - sorry the RP has disappointed you.

[Chocolate Thai]

Well, Death...I'm also sorry you're disappointed.

The mind control was an unexpected twist for me too, but in the spirit of roleplay, I've gone along with it and have found it both fun and challenging to try and write my character's reactions to it. In the end, I just want her thoroughly dominated and raped, and it looks like that's about to happen- hopefully for the first of many more times  to come-  so I'm still happy.

 As far as Max getting his balls squeezed...I think that'll take him out of the (raping) game too early for me...so I'll leave his poor balls alone... for now. But I'm sure he'll bear alot of scratches and bruises for his trickery...My girls are always fighters and he surely isn't 'getting off ' that easily lol

[death2Uall]

Hmmm. 

I didn't say I was no longer happy with the story, just that one portion of it had disappointed me.  And that (you'll remember I'm a big [BIG] mind control fan) is mostly because you went through several pages of roleplaying without a hint that this game was going to include any paranormal abilities at all.  Not a single indication of it.

Part of the problem here (and it's my problem, not yours) might be that while all you guys were planning on doing is having some fun without worrying about what does or doesn't make sense, I'm always thinking like an author, and planning like an author.

And as an author, what I'm seeing here is the introduction of abilities that, unlike Simone's gymnastic skills, are not just unusual but unnatural; normal hypnosis can NOT cause a person to do anything he/she would otherwise not do, and it's fairly obvious Simone has NO desire to cuddle with Max.  It also can't be induced automatically or instantly.  Which makes Max's abilities paranormal, to say the least.  Adding such without warning the reader is disconcerting and breaks the willing suspension of disbelief, which is never good for a story.

More importantly, what I'm seeing is the sudden invalidation of the entire story concept as presented thus far.  What started as an unfair - but - perhaps - winnable contest has suddenly become something Max cannot lose, because he has this unfair and unnatural advantage.  How difficult could it possibly be for Max the Superman to win when he can hypnotize Simone in an instant, at any time, even in her sleep, and simply suggest that she lose?  Or that she present competitions she cannot win?

Frankly Simone should step on Max's crank right now.  Not because what he did was sleazy and nasty (hey, I like sleazy and nasty!), just to preserve any pretense of dramatic tension in this story/game.

 

[Sprayman]

Death,

Again, Sorry I/we have disappointed you. What's done is done however.

[death2Uall]

Don't apologize; it's YOUR game, not mine, and it IS just a game, not a novel.  I will continue to read with great interest, if only to see if any dramatic tension manages to develop.

[Sterling7]

I do think that at this point, however, Max ought to be able to handle the situation with Simone without the Judge intervening with the shock collar.

[Sprayman]

Agreed Sterling - and he is working in that direction.

[Quixote]

I have one thought to share.

You remember the girl who brought the rope, and how as she was leaving she gave Simone a "sad, knowing" sympathetic glance?

Well if she's JB resort-certified for room service she shouldn't have done that.  I just hope the Judge noticed and that suitable corrective action was administered.

I would hate for standards to slip at that fine facility ... :-)

[Sprayman]

I must say Quix that you have a fine eye.

The judge may not have noticed that infraction and Max was somewhat busy at the time. Max has just requested another piece of equipment and it's likely that the same redheaded slave will bring it to him. Perhaps she will be repremanded this time for her earlier error. Max is much more pleasantly occupied now and isn't worried about Simone escaping.

Time will tell...

[Quixote]

Good to hear.

My ongoing congratulations on another fine roleplay, Spray.  I'm really enjoying reading it.  You too, CT; lovely work.

[Sprayman]

Thanks Quix - it's been fun and CT is a great player.