New Author here

[Amanda Serve]

Hello,

My pen name is "Amanda Serve".

I've known of Alebeard for over a decade. He is my hero.
Emma is awesome, and the two of them seem super happy together in everything I've seen of them.
That is absolutely the coolest thing, and the reason I came back to this website/submitted my stories.

I had just discovered the internet about ten years ago, and read some dirty fiction. That led me to this site and it's decadent titles. I have been inspired by Phil Phantom, Vulgus, Hooked6 to name a few of my favorite internet authors.

I had written some stories years ago, but I do not have them still on my computer.

Recently, I got the idea to write again. I have been writing a series I call "Family Feud".

The first story is on this site, it is about 12 chapters long. In the first book, I introduce the all-American modern nuclear family.
The mom is an over-achieving career woman who holds the family together (at least by her own estimation).
The dad is out of work, and out of shape, former high school football star, your typical "Everyguy" is what I was going for with him.
The eldest son is a slacker's slacker, he is lazy, and he even half-asses things he half-asses (making them quarter ass?). Everyone knows someone like him, or they are this guy.
 He does apply himself to the things that interest him, although if not, he could care less.
Finally the daughter is a perky, cheerleader who takes after her mom.

In the first story, the women of the family try to motivate the guys to get in shape, take responsibility etc and end up escalating things until they've cuckolded them. There is a slow progression to that point.

I recently re-wrote this story adding new content and call it my "Blue-Ray" version. This is also because at the time I wrote it, I did not have spellcheck, so I went back and fixed a lot of mistakes.

Family Feud II is the longest story I've written to date, spanning thirty chapters.

In it, the girls get their cum-uppance. I won't spoil the plot for you, but things turn around and now it's the men's turn to rule the roost. I hope this story hold's some surprises for you. I write basically the stories I wish there were more of on a personal level. I try not to paint people as 'villains', as much as I do illustrate their motivations, and expose their thoughts.

Family Feud III I just sent to Emma, and hope it will be posted here. I only have 19 chapters completed. I've been inspired enough to write a chapter a day pretty much. It has been a real labor of love. I think it is some of my best writing. It is a continuation of FF2, picking up right where they left off.

Really, there isn't much else to tell about me. I enjoy writing, and am a single parent just trying to get through life. I like to play with these themes in my head, and only there. As long as that is where it stays, there is no harm in some of the more taboo aspects of my writing.



 

[Emma]

Yah!  Glad you decided to come join our filthy little play ground.  Its been more quiet here lately than Id like but hopefully it picks back up.  I switched you over to author status so you can enter 'authors corner'  Ill get the Third installation of Family Feud up soon.  Jump into any of the threads and watch them resurrect.     Here are direct links  Family Feud I and Family Feud II

[Amanda Serve]

yay! Thank you.

I also sent some edits to Family Feud II, I went in and corrected some things.

I am always tweaking and twerking my chapters. Sorry about that.

[Sprayman]

Welcome to our dark place. Glad to have you with us and hope to hear from you often.

I'm in complete agreement about Alebeard and Emma. I had the pleasure to meet them and spend a few days as their houseguest. Super people in every respect!

I'm also an author with stories on menus 29, 30, and 31. Hope to read your work soon. Once again, welcome!

[Emma]

yay! Thank you.

I also sent some edits to Family Feud II, I went in and corrected some things.

I am always tweaking and twerking my chapters. Sorry about that.

Im sorry about that.  I thought i had the right one.  Ill get that fixed tonite.  xxoo

[Dr_BuzzCzar]

Welcome! I'm always glad to see anew author join our gang of merry pranksters and pervs. Enjoy yourself.

[Quixote]

I would have said hi sooner, but now I can say hi and that I like your stories, at the same time.  :-)

[Emma]

merry pranksters

LIKE

[Sprayman]

Have now read and enjoyed Family Feud. Looking forward to the next installment.

[Violet]

Hey, sorry I haven't said 'hi' sooner - have been swamped with stuff in the real world, unfortunately!  Thrilled to have another author here, hope you'll love it here just as much as I do!

[CS Wolfe]

A belated welcome! Like everyone has said, good to see more authors on. The more suffering characters we have the better!

[Dr_BuzzCzar]

I've read both Family Feud and Family Feud II and loved them. Thanks for sharing. I saw the WoW reference at the end of II, do you play? (Disclaimer: Playing Rift now, former EQ and Wow addict).

[Amanda Serve]

 I actually don't play video games, thank you for asking.

I try really hard to put all kinds of references into my stories. In Family Feud III (of which there are 20 chapters) I've also managed to find ways (in context) to cuss in german, chinese, and I think one other language.  I just google things I need to know and try to muddle my way through it. I've been lucky some times people write to me to tell me about my mistakes.

FF3 isn't finished yet, probably won't be for a while. I am not sure if Emma was planning on posting that one up.

I definitely like constructive feedback about the story. I'd say FF3 is my favorite story most of all.

I actually started keeping a 'companion' piece to the series. A list of all the characters and easter eggs I bury in the story.

If you like I will email to Emma to post up.


Thanks to all of you who said hello, and an extra thanks for reading my stories. I get a lot of joy out of the idea of other people enjoying them.

[Amanda Serve]

This may sound weird, but here is a question for those of you who play WOW.

This is an excerpt of something one of the characters in chapter 23 of Family Feud III says in their journal:
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I had just completed Uldamann for the seventh time with my 65th level Death Knight. It was a pretty good run, I managed to get the Gni'kiv Medallion from the dwarf's chest in Dig Two, and a Staff part from Revelosh but I think it is soul bound so I am not sure if I can send it to my blood elf.

I should be looking for a job and all that, but the way I look at it the time I am Master of the house is time I really need to enjoy. If I am out interviewing (if I managed to get one) I may miss out on some of the stuff I really need to manage around here with the girls. Let’s be honest, also I really love to play World of Warcraft. I finally left my guild and started my own. I used to avoid leadership roles, but I find I love the shit out of it.

Speaking of things I love the shit out of, the first of my lovely little whores is home. Which one is it? Oh Wendy, my beautiful wife and personal slave cunt.
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Is the World of Warcraft reference authentic? I google searched a forum discussion on Wow and sort of pieced it together. It is background color to the story (What he is doing when the others walk in).

[Dr_BuzzCzar]

This may sound weird, but here is a question for those of you who play WOW.

This is an excerpt of something one of the characters in chapter 23 of Family Feud III says in their journal:
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I had just completed Uldamann for the seventh time with my 65th level Death Knight. It was a pretty good run, I managed to get the Gni'kiv Medallion from the dwarf's chest in Dig Two, and a Staff part from Revelosh but I think it is soul bound so I am not sure if I can send it to my blood elf.

I should be looking for a job and all that, but the way I look at it the time I am Master of the house is time I really need to enjoy. If I am out interviewing (if I managed to get one) I may miss out on some of the stuff I really need to manage around here with the girls. Let’s be honest, also I really love to play World of Warcraft. I finally left my guild and started my own. I used to avoid leadership roles, but I find I love the shit out of it.

Speaking of things I love the shit out of, the first of my lovely little whores is home. Which one is it? Oh Wendy, my beautiful wife and personal slave cunt.
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Is the World of Warcraft reference authentic? I google searched a forum discussion on Wow and sort of pieced it together. It is background color to the story (What he is doing when the others walk in).

Uldaman only has one 'n'.  Overall you're pretty close on Revelosh. He carries a shaft(Tsol) and 1/2 of a staff of. Adding the Medallion(Gni'kiv) and the shaft to the 1/2 staff he carries, yields the complete Staff of Pretoria. Trivia the name of the shaft and the medallion read backwards reads "Lost Viking". I had to research it as I've been away from WoW for a few years.