New Author here

[Amanda Serve]

Thank you.

So if I wanted to rewrite:

"I had just completed Uldaman for the seventh time with my 65th level Death Knight. It was a pretty good run, I managed to get the Gni'kiv Medallion from the dwarf's chest in Dig Two, and a Staff part from Revelosh but I think it is soul bound so I am not sure if I can send it to my blood elf."

To sound more accurate about someone who went through it, what should I say?

[Dr_BuzzCzar]

Thank you.

So if I wanted to rewrite:

"I had just completed Uldaman for the seventh time with my 65th level Death Knight. It was a pretty good run, I managed to get the Gni'kiv Medallion from the dwarf's chest in Dig Two, and a Staff part from Revelosh but I think it is soul bound so I am not sure if I can send it to my blood elf."

To sound more accurate about someone who went through it, what should I say?

I suggest: "I had just completed Uldaman for the seventh time with my level 65 Death Knight. It was a pretty good run, I managed to get the Gni'kiv Medallion from the dwarf's chest in Dig Two. That and the Tsol shaft from Revelosh got me the Staff of Prehistoria but I think it is soul bound so I am not sure if I can send it to my blood elf."

Gamers gerenally tend to love the various names given by the developers to items.

[Amanda Serve]

ooh that is suitably cryptic (to anyone who doesn't play), which is what I was going for!

Perfect!!


Thank you very much.

[Emma]

You guys are funny.. hehe   Im a WoW head with a deleted game console at the moment.  I couldnt stop if it was alive and well on my puter..  I can post FFIII any time.  Just let me know.

[Amanda Serve]

I keep making changes and tweaks.

I hate to keep sending updates and making you do extra work.

It would be cool if there was some way I could just make a forum post and each chapter was like a new post. Then I could edit it.

Let me send you my latest as a zip file, and see what you think.

It picks up right where FFII leaves off. At the County Fair, so you've got dunking tanks, and all sorts of fun challenges and games that can happen.

I am writing chapter 25 right now.

[Amanda Serve]

more trivia, I am trying to think of a good modern song to hum when giving a hummer.

I used to use Tool's Sober, lol.

[Dr_BuzzCzar]

I am not able to offer anything modern that would fit your story's musical needs as I know very little modern tunes. Mostly I listen to a bunch of old or dead singers and musicians. If you would consider a classic song for a similar situation in the future, Otis Redding had a song that would be very good, know as  "Fa-fa-fa-fa" or "Sad Song"  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XKurz5mI770

[Jon Smithie]

Hi Amanda

Really enjoyed Family Feud.  It's not the kind of story I ordinarily like, I'm more into NC, interrogation type stories but I started reading yours and it kept me going.  It's well written and amusing, even insightful (and of course, really perverted) and I enjoyed it.  Thanks for writing.

[Amanda Serve]

Thank you so much. Have you read FF2 and 3?

The 3rd one definitely steps it up a notch.

The 4th one will probably be the final.

And Dr Buzzcar, I will definitely consider it. I ended up asking my real life daughter what a good uptempo song was. I didn't tell her why I needed it.

She gave me this one, so it is in the story:


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bw9CALKOvAI

So now when the main character does hummers, it's to this tune.

As a side note, haven't stopped dancing around the house to it since I first heard it. Hard song to get out of your head once its in.

[Emma]

I started listening to it and hadda click out.. i do not what that stuck in my head!!!!

[Amanda Serve]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O4yzyz1FYIA

Here is an interesting youtube of ponygirls. It is amazing what they will allow on youtube (and what people film themselves doing to put on there).

I plan to add some ponygirl training to family feud IV, so I've already started thinking about that.

I sent a few more chapters to family feud III. No rush on adding them.

I am up to chapter 31 but I spend a little time proofreading and asking friends for feedback.

[redlegtiger]

Hey Amanda,

Sorry I missed you when you joined.  Welcome to our little perverted corner of the internet.  It's always nice to have other authors to chat with.  I would like to say I have read your story but haven't yet. I do have your story saved to read when I get the chance.  I saved it for reading before you posted it here as it immediately caught my interest the first time I saw it and read the story synopsis at another site. Between working and writing my own story and real life, it's hard to find time for reading so it takes me a while.  I look forward to reading your story.  I will give you feedback once I do read the story.