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« on: November 09, 2007, 12:35:18 PM »

The Brochure
by Quixote

The brochure comes hand-delivered, by courier.  You have been waiting for it.  Your cock hardens and lust clouds your brain at the idea of what is inside this envelope.  You are almost insane before you even open it.  You have heard so much about it.  You have dreamed for so long.  You are welcome.  You are rich enough to afford it.  Everything you want is in that envelope.  You close the door to your study and you sit at your desk and, with a gold letter-opener, you cut the heavy brown paper and let the brochure slide out onto the desk.  The cover is plain.  There are just the words …

Joy Beach Resort
Guests’ Brochure

You open the brochure.  There are no pictures, you are pleased to notice.  There is no need for pictures here, now, not when you are going to go to this place.  You begin to read…

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Introduction

Joy Beach Resort is the finest resort in the world.  It isn’t the finest resort in the world because of its accommodations; the thirty luxury beach villas or the magnificent rooms in our sumptuous hotel.  It isn’t the finest resort in the world because of the miles of private white-sand beaches where you can enjoy the Mediterranean climate. It isn’t the finest resort in the world because of its three world-class restaurants, the luxurious Hotel Bar or the two beach bars.  It isn’t the finest resort in the world because of it’s 18-hole golf course, or the tennis-courts, or the five swimming pools, or even because of the casino.

It is the finest resort in the world because of the service, which is provided twenty-four hours a day, every day, by the more than two-hundred young slave-girls who are held in the complex.

When you are wakened in the morning, it will be a beautiful young woman who is there to wake you up exactly the way you like, before serving you your breakfast.   Each night you will fall asleep beside a naked, utterly submissive woman whom you picked from the interactive menu to be exactly to your liking.

And anytime in between that you wish, these helpless girls will be at your beck and call, always ready to serve you in any way you desire, and provide you with any pleasure that you wish.

Please read the rest of the Guests’ Brochure to find out about the joy that Joy Beach Resort  is waiting to bring you.

*****

You skip the page about travel arrangements and the page about prices for the different accommodations and the different extras.  But as you flip past you feel a slight tingling rush from the knowledge that neither make any difference.  You can go anywhere.  You have nothing but time.  And enough money to spend that time absolutely any way you like …

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The Hotel

The luxury of the Joy Beach Resort Hotel is second to none.  But we won’t bore you with the things we have that other hotels have.  The beds, the bathrooms, the balconies or the stunning views.  Here’s what makes us special.

ROOM SERVICE - Our room service is beyond first-class.  It is literally fantastic.  We provide fantasies, at no extra cost, 24/7, for our guests’ enjoyment.

Your room television will provide an interactive display of all available slave-girls, along with photos for you to select a whore for your enjoyment by any criteria you like: hair-colour, ethnicity, age, height, breast-size or almost anything you can think of.  She will knock on your door under five minutes later, naked or clothed as you prefer, there to fulfil your fantasy.

Maybe you want a slow, languorous blowjob, or a pussy or asshole clamped around your cock.  Maybe you want to take a piss on a beautiful woman’s face.  Maybe you want to make a slave-girl scream and cry and beg for mercy as you brutally torture her soft, womanly body with any implements you like (your room will be stocked according to your specifications).  Maybe you just want to tie a girl up and relax watching her writhe in painful bondage, decorating your room with her agonised body.

Whatever you want, that knock on the door means it’s yours.

RAPE FLOOR – Sometimes we all want something that isn’t docile.  We want to violate and torment a bitch who hasn’t been tamed; who doesn’t know that she is a fucktoy.  That’s what the Rape Floor is for.  We kidnap young women from all over the world and imprison them in this recreational facility.  They are feisty.  They are angry.  They are scared.  They are vulnerable.  They are yours to play with.

Some end up being trained as slave-girls for the permanent staff of the Resort.  Some are sold at our regular auctions (to be delivered to anywhere on Earth the buyer designates).  But when they first arrive, and they are still wearing the clothes from their old lives, and they still think they are independent women, who don’t have to do anything they don’t want to, they are all yours.

Guests are free to indulge in raping and gangbanging these young sluts anyway you wish, anytime you wish.  You can teach them to fuck and suck just the way you like, with our helpful training staff on hand to help you use whips and paddles and clamps and needles and electricity on young captives’ cunts and tits to help make sure that the bitches learn every lesson you want to teach them.

*****

Your mind drifts away from the brochure as you imagine your first day at the Hotel.  You won’t want to lie in on such a beautiful day, with so many beautiful young unwilling women just waiting to be despoiled and humiliated and ravaged and dominated and damaged and abused.  You will have a teenage girl wake you.  You will have ordered her dressed in jeans and a t-shirt, to make her seem more like those filthy cunts you see on the streets.  She will be … yes … blonde.  Big tits.  No.  Not too big.  The first thing you will feel will be her mouth enveloping your hard cock and bobbing gently up and down.  You will finally open your eyes to look down at her innocent face as she swallows your come.  You will need a piss.  Her mouth?  No.  Her body?  Not yet.  Don’t want to waste time cleaning her up.  She can just kneel by the toilet and hold your cock and maybe lean down and kiss your balls as you piss.  Perfect.

What next?  Everything.  Enjoy the subjugated little toy.  Make her strip.  Make her bend over for a spanking or caning or paddling or whipping or all of them until she cries and screams.  Watching her cru will be great.  Then maybe give it to her hard in the ass.  Just pound the shit out of her.  Yeah.  Good plan.  Leave her on the wooden pony you’ll request for your room while you sit at the table and eat your lunch.  Watching the pain in her pussy eat away at her sanity, at her soul.  Whip her tits.  Throat-fuck her just a little, just to warm you up and then down to the Rape Floor, knowing she’ll be removed before you come back.

Some young girl from anywhere.  Something exotic.  African.  Asian.  Maybe South American.  Spend the day teaching her how you like your blowjobs.  Use electricity passed through nipple clamps and a riding crop and chilli oil on her clitoris to help her learn, like the brochure says.  When you go in she’ll be defiant.  You don’t want a scared, miserable, despairing one.   You want an angry one.  Yes, defiant.  When you go into her cell she’ll look at you with hatred.  When you leave she’ll be broken.  Naked, bound and broken.  Her face covered in come and tears.  You’ll have taught her about pain.  You’ll have taught her what a little fuckslave like her is for.

Maybe the Restaurant for dinner…

You go back to reading the brochure.  The Restaurant has naked waitresses and complimentary under-the-table blowjobs while you eat.  There’s a floor show.  Virgins from the Rape Floor get violated.  Slavegirls form long daisy chains.  Guests can sign up to participate.  You keep reading.

Naked, clamped caddies and ball-girls for the golf course and tennis courts.  Slave-girls offering bar service to you as you sunbathe on the beach.  Bar service including bringing you drinks, and food, and their skilled mouths, wet cunts and tight assholes.  More information about the slave auctions.  And about the costumes that slaves can wear for you and the roles they can play for you on almost zero notice: schoolgirls or nurses or policewomen or rich bitches who just need to be ordered down onto their knees… Themed parties where everyone dresses as Roman citizens and the girls are Roman slavegirls …  Scripted fantasies within 24 hours.  You always wanted to be a pimp?  No problem.  You can whip your whores into shape and then pimp them out, sir.  The other guests will join in happily as customers.  How many ho’s would you like? …

Then, in the Special Services section you’ve been reading at the back, you read another entry that takes your breath away.

*****

Betrayal
Women are welcome at the resort as guests, single or accompanied, but they are also welcome in other, less luxurious capacities.

If you wish it, a woman who accompanies you to the Resort can be diverted, straight from the plane, and sent directly to the Rape Floor.  Perhaps this young lady is a nagging wife, or a cheating girlfriend, or a cockteasing personal assistant.  Whatever she was before, when she is returned to you at the end of your stay, she will be thoroughly tamed, humbled and broken into an obedient slave by the days and nights of rape and torture she will have endured.  She will be willing to do anything you might wish in order to avoid your sending her back.  (You may tell her you can send her back for free if she rebels.  This is true, but has never yet been necessary.  When we at Joy Beach Resort break a woman, she stays broken.)

For another option, please note that if you do not wish the whore to be returned to you at the end of your stay, then the Betrayal service is complementary.

*****

You can’t think.  Your cock is so hard.  Your mind is reeling.  There is a loud knock at the door.

“Yes?”

The door opens.  And she is standing there, dressed for the party.  So sexy.  So young.

“Are you sorry yet, you pervert?”

You look at her.  It’s like you are in a different world from the one you know.

“Yes, dear.  I’m sorry.”

“I mean, I know it’s your birthday, but I’ve told you, I don’t suck cock.  It’s disgusting.”

“Yes, dear.  I’m really very sorry I asked.”

She smiles.

“Well … ok.  It’s over with now.  Let’s go to your party.”

You stand up and walk to her.

“I hate upsetting you,” you say.  “Let me make it up to you.”

She takes your arm.

“Does daddy have candy for me?” she asks playfully, pressing her tits against your upper arm.

“How would you feel about a nice long vacation?” you ask.
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« Reply #1 on: November 10, 2007, 08:24:48 AM »

"I don't suck sock" may be the worst typo of my entire life ...
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« Reply #2 on: November 10, 2007, 02:34:51 PM »

I read that.  I wondered if it might be something I didn't recognize...

I urban dictionaried it.  I still didn't understand.  Glad that was cleared up
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« Reply #3 on: November 10, 2007, 02:38:32 PM »

2 points:

1)  Is there any way to correct it?

2)  More importantly, did you like the story?  I think it may be a response to an overdose of dofantasy ...
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« Reply #4 on: November 10, 2007, 02:58:58 PM »

H. O. T.

My mind went reeling.. so many places to go with this intro! I can see a single storyline, or several blossoming from within and around.

Thank you!

(I think if you are logged in you can simply hit the "modify" icon from the top right side of your post and edit what you need? I saw a couple other typos, but really didn't get caught on them.)
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« Reply #5 on: November 10, 2007, 03:19:41 PM »

Thank you for the praise!

So glad you liked it.  (And thanks for the tip - I'm a bit of a newbie to forums in general, also generally oblivious ...)

It was just a weird idea I had and I ended up writing it all down really fast and then wanting to show it to everybody in a hurry, hence the lousy proofing.

When I write porn I always end up writing things that would make a great opening for a much longer work, which I never write (although no-one ever asked nicely before, so no telling what might happen then ...).  The plus side is the possibility of sending minds reeling with the possibilities presented.  Glad you felt that way.  For the record, anyone is welcome to add on anything they like (although I know I already helped start Help Wanted, with any luck the two might meet in the middle, the way they dug the tunnel under the English Channel from both ends.)

Special Note For The Gracious And Beautiful Subnoxious:  Do feel free to let me know any thoughts that this little tale inspired.  Anything exceptionally filthy should of course be private messaged to me, to make me feel special.   :P 
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« Reply #6 on: November 10, 2007, 03:41:01 PM »

When I write porn I always end up writing things that would make a great opening for a much longer work, which I never write (although no-one ever asked nicely before, so no telling what might happen then ...).  The plus side is the possibility of sending minds reeling with the possibilities presented.  Glad you felt that way.  For the record, anyone is welcome to add on anything they like (although I know I already helped start Help Wanted, with any luck the two might meet in the middle, the way they dug the tunnel under the English Channel from both ends.)

Special Note For The Gracious And Beautiful Subnoxious:  Do feel free to let me know any thoughts that this little tale inspired.  Anything exceptionally filthy should of course be private messaged to me, to make me feel special.   :P 


This story makes me want to write all the more. I love writing, I just don't sit down and do it as much as I think I may like. Too many brands in the fire, I suppose. But this one sucked me in and held me there.. just the sort of story I love! Actually, those are the only type I end up finishing.. if they don't suck me in, I've no use for them.

At first it felt a little like The Story of O, but better. I love the twist about the wife coming in and the conversation had. Not that I could imagine myself as the wife, mind you... Then it felt like one of the "exotic retreats" that are publisized in certain places.. then my mind crossed over into "I wonder if some of those "exotic retreats" don't get their "employees" via the black market slavery underground.. much like this story might subtly suggest.

Whew. Did I mention it was H. O. T.? I might actually have to pimp myself to get a membership, or count my pennies to get one so that I can read some of your other works!

Meet in the middle? Why would ANYONE want to meet in the middle... willingly?! (grin)
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« Reply #7 on: November 10, 2007, 03:42:12 PM »

P.S. "Feel Special" private messages will begin shortly.   ;D
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« Reply #8 on: November 10, 2007, 04:47:33 PM »

That is the nicest response I have ever gotten for one of these.  You are too kind, gracious lady.

If you wish to see them, I really must remember to send you the two of my three RPP stories that I still have (sad tale of computer disaster - there was so much more of the third that I was going to get around to sending to Emma ...)

On the other hand, now that I think about it, pimp yourself you say?  Now just giving them to you seems positively antisocial.  I don't want those two mad at me!
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« Reply #9 on: November 10, 2007, 04:48:26 PM »

P.S.  *opens and closes mouth a few times, before giving up*
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« Reply #10 on: November 10, 2007, 05:18:58 PM »

P.S.  *opens and closes mouth a few times, before giving up*


Don't get carried away with the freebees. You might be able to work out a better deal!  ;D

I liked the story - you should write another chapter telling about the 'vacation' and how she liked it!
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« Reply #11 on: November 10, 2007, 05:41:55 PM »

This idea is VFH (Very Fucking Hot). And I wish I'd seen the 'sucking sock' reference - I'm always on the lookout for new fetishes.
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« Reply #12 on: November 10, 2007, 05:44:49 PM »

This idea is VFH (Very Fucking Hot). And I wish I'd seen the 'sucking sock' reference - I'm always on the lookout for new fetishes.


Moth - I've tried a few, but think I'll pass on that one!
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« Reply #13 on: November 10, 2007, 05:47:21 PM »

(shoves that pesky Sprayman back into the hole from which he came, then covering said hole with a large rock, upon which I now sit)

We shouldn't let others come between what you and I obviously have, wouldn't you agree?! I mean really.. the idea of trying to negotiate something better from a poor, unsuspecting, otherwise naive woman of your fan base just seems.. so wrong. Does it not? Of course it does... you are a reasonable man after all!

Sprayman obviously has little in the way of "all good things come to those who wait" and to rush the creative, and oh so sexy creative process is a thing that should be a punishable offense! (can I do it, can I?!! pleeeeeze?!!!)

Think of your contribution as feeding a starving illiterate. (that sounds convincing, no?)

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« Reply #14 on: November 10, 2007, 05:50:43 PM »

Post from before Subnoxious's post:

Glad you guys like it.  I love the way this forum means I can actually get some feedback for a change!

Got some interesting ideas for another chapter.

Got lots of other things I should be doing, but I am quite likely to ignore them.   ;D
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