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« Reply #15 on: November 10, 2007, 05:53:22 PM »
Quote from: subnoxious on November 10, 2007, 05:47:21 PM
(shoves that pesky Sprayman back into the hole from which he came, then covering said hole with a large rock, upon which I now sit)

We shouldn't let others come between what you and I obviously have, wouldn't you agree?! I mean really.. the idea of trying to negotiate something better from a poor, unsuspecting, otherwise naive woman of your fan base just seems.. so wrong. Does it not? Of course it does... you are a reasonable man after all!

Sprayman obviously has little in the way of "all good things come to those who wait" and to rush the creative, and oh so sexy creative process is a thing that should be a punishable offense! (can I do it, can I?!! pleeeeeze?!!!)

Think of your contribution as feeding a starving illiterate. (that sounds convincing, no?)




Wow, what a load of crap. Watch yourself Quixote, Subnoxious is looking for something more than you were offering!
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« Reply #16 on: November 10, 2007, 05:57:11 PM »
(just chuckles merrily)
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« Reply #17 on: November 10, 2007, 05:58:45 PM »
Quote from: subnoxious on November 10, 2007, 05:57:11 PM
(just chuckles merrily)


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« Reply #18 on: November 10, 2007, 06:01:49 PM »
Hmmm ...

I'm confused.  Not sure what to say.  This might be some kind of transatlantic misunderstanding.  What exactly are you after, Subnoxious?

And in any case, I don't remember a deal.  More of an ... opening of negotiations.   ;D
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« Reply #19 on: November 10, 2007, 06:02:51 PM »
I did completely enjoy this story.. and have read it a few times now. I find that I am split on whether it should really be continued or not. I mean.. a HUGE part of this is the mindfuck for the reader, and that was set up and delivered SO very well. On the other hand it could easily go on and trump what has already been set up...

How do you know when you should leave as is, or continue and risk blowing the whole thing?

I'm not after a thing, Q.. no misunderstandings, transatlantical or otherwise. :)
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« Reply #20 on: November 10, 2007, 06:04:30 PM »
Quote from: subnoxious on November 10, 2007, 06:02:51 PM
I did completely enjoy this story.. and have read it a few times now. I find that I am split on whether it should really be continued or not. I mean.. a HUGE part of this is the mindfuck for the reader, and that was set up and delivered SO very well. On the other hand it could easily go on and trump what has already been set up...

How do you know when you should leave as is, or continue and risk blowing the whole thing?




Follow your heart?
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« Reply #21 on: November 10, 2007, 06:14:29 PM »
Did you two enjoy your crazy skirmish?

Good.

I'm not sure.  I think I may have a groovy idea for another chapter.  I'll see.

P.S. for Sub:  Shame.  I was curious what images it inspired in your brain.  And you are welcome to see my stories if you wish, though I do recommend getting a pass.  It rocks in there.  Personally, I wrote my way in.  You could try it yourself.
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« Reply #22 on: November 10, 2007, 06:19:25 PM »
(smiles ever so sweetly)

And I was so looking forward to painting those images to you.. but given the moment of paranoia that the mean old man injected.. I'll simply save them all for myself.

PS Ale and Emma both know me in person.. or at least a particular side to me.. I'm sure one of them could say something delightfully bad about me if you need a reference!
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« Reply #23 on: November 10, 2007, 06:31:22 PM »
Ah well.  C'est la vie.
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« Reply #24 on: November 10, 2007, 06:34:57 PM »
Oh, and thanks for the compliment on the mindfuck delivery.  I try.   :)
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« Reply #25 on: November 10, 2007, 06:36:39 PM »
As for smiling ever so sweetly though, that's just plain playing dirty.

I admire that in a woman.   ;D
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« Reply #26 on: November 10, 2007, 06:41:09 PM »
LOL.. Yay!

I say again.. I love how you think!
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« Reply #27 on: November 10, 2007, 06:59:26 PM »
You're very sweet.  And marvellously evil.

A wonderful combination.

As you see, regarding you letting me in on what the story made you think, as with so much in my life, I don't beg, but I do flatter.  More effective, and more fun.

lol
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« Reply #28 on: November 10, 2007, 07:07:19 PM »
(mutters to self about sneaky charming men.. and the women who fall for it.)
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« Reply #29 on: November 10, 2007, 07:07:52 PM »
Oh...! But that is something else we have in common...

I don't beg either!

LOL
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