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« on: March 15, 2008, 04:38:11 PM »
Here's the place to leave comments and. or criticisms about the Journey II story.
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« Reply #1 on: March 16, 2008, 07:21:57 PM »
Very sexy story, so far (it's at the 16 post stage).  Loving where this is heading.  Is there any way I can become involved? I can't do any of the thousand word posts sort of thing, but can do short posts of the length that have come so far.
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« Reply #2 on: March 16, 2008, 07:38:09 PM »
See no reason why not Moth. Lets hold off until I get Candy in the barn, which should be soon, then we'll figure out how to work you in. PM me and let me know how you'd want to work in. Only thing I wouldn't want would be for your character to steal Candy.
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« Reply #3 on: March 16, 2008, 09:50:49 PM »
I know that's a set up for a killer punchline, but I just can't quite work it out...
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« Reply #4 on: March 17, 2008, 04:02:01 AM »
Quote from: mothbrad on March 16, 2008, 09:50:49 PM
I know that's a set up for a killer punchline, but I just can't quite work it out...


Think on it - I'm sure you will come up with something!
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« Reply #5 on: June 05, 2008, 07:09:22 AM »
Latent Slave has told me she will not be returning to this thread.

Therefore, I am looking for a female member of the forum to assume the character of 'Candy Cummings' in the Journey II thread so that it can continue from it's present point. Ladies, please read over the thread. If you are interested, contact me here or by PM and we can discuss it.

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« Reply #6 on: June 06, 2008, 08:16:12 AM »
Ladies,

Don't be bashful. alexiew has joined the thread as Candy Cummings, but there is lots more room for painsluts...Oops... I mean players of the female persuasion to join us at the barn.

We can always use fresh blood... Oops again... fresh talent in this Role Play adventure.

Contact me here or by PM if you would like to play. Mothbrad and I would be more than happy to...ahem... *cough - cough*... break you in!

Your involvement could be as little as 20 or 30 minutes, 2 or 3 days a week!

Sprayman

(If I'm too scary for you to talk to, please feel free to contact Mothbrad, who is much nicer than me!...*cough - gag - cough*...)
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« Reply #7 on: June 06, 2008, 03:03:58 PM »
I knew I never should have left that barn ...

*sigh*  Some blokes have all the luck.
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« Reply #8 on: June 06, 2008, 03:20:09 PM »
Aaw - you could always come back. You can't stay at Joy Beach forever, even if you want to.
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« Reply #9 on: July 14, 2008, 02:56:05 PM »
After reading a few posts in Journey, goodgod.. thats hot.       Dirty men.. senseless girl to debase.    I need to start from the very beginning soon and read each entry.   Maybe a nice bedtime story to print out. 

thank gods for perverts...
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« Reply #10 on: July 14, 2008, 08:00:50 PM »
Glad you like it Emma. It's been fun.
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« Reply #11 on: August 11, 2008, 10:19:46 PM »
my oh my... some excellent work being done on this story by you three....
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« Reply #12 on: August 11, 2008, 10:47:15 PM »
Thanks for the comment - it's fun to take part in as well.
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« Reply #13 on: August 21, 2008, 06:12:04 PM »
Finally got a minute to catch up on reading it.

I am in awe.

Uninteresting side note:  Regarding the poem to which Julie referred, my mother always used to paraphrase its most famous lines:

"If you can keep your head when all about you are losing theirs ... you probably don't understand the problem."
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« Reply #14 on: November 18, 2009, 06:36:19 PM »
Just wanted to say how beautifully Journey III has started.  Keep up the good work, both of you.

Any doms collaborating this time, or is it just one on one?

Come to think of it, isn't it about time Violet showed up at the barn?  :-)
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