Karen and Michelle's Sad Story

[redlegtiger]

Welcome Fans,

This is the place to comment on any part of Karen and Michelle's Sad Story.  This is a three part story that has taken on a life of its own.  I had originally planned on about 30 chapters and as many of you know I have posted 58 and have written 62  (Four chapters are in editing)  and I am just winding down the second part. 

I am looking for an illustrator for the story.  While writing the story seems to come naturally, an artist I am not.  If any of you have a bit of talent, please contact me about doing some illustrations.  I would really love to have pictures to go along with the story line.  If you see a picture that you think would make a good scene in the story, please send it to me.  I have been known to use scenes of pictures or drawings to inspire story lines. 

I look forward to reading your comments and suggestions. 

redlegtiger

PS:  The two pictures below have been created for me by Peterpd.  His email is peterpd@gmx.de.  If you like his work, send him an email.  I am trying to get him to do some other scenes.   The younger, more conservatively dressed young woman is Karen at her prom at the age of 15.  The second picture of the older, more sensual woman is the adult Karen.  This is a scene I plan on including in a future chapter as she goes back to the scene of her last real happy event in her life before the organization.

[Alebeard]

This is just one of those epic stories
for awhile I got a little lost as Karen succummed to liking what was going on, but you picked me back up pretty quick, wow, what a tale!

[John_F_Drake]

I keep hearing such fantastic things about this story... I must read it!

[redlegtiger]

Thanks Alebeard.  I'm sure that as the story goes on there will be lulls in the really wicked action and then it will swing back to being the violent epic that you love.  It is a three part story and I am just winding down the 2nd part.  Karen will be coming home soon.  Brittany will be coming home with her as her slave.  I'm thinking of having Karen hand her off to either her mother or to Aminda and Michelle.  I'm leaning toward Aminda and Michelle because they definitely have a grudge to hold against her.  Let me know what you think.  this will all happen at the beginning of Part 3.

[redlegtiger]

There are some out there who have a hard time keeping track of the maze.  The bitchpups punishment in the maze takes four chapters so here is a list of the maze stations and a picture of the maze layout with the stations identified by number.  I am also including a map of the Clearview Campus that shows where everything is located in the story.

1.atomic dildos w/pins and rotting bull testicles eaten
2.dead horse fuck/suck
3.getting fucked by human male while paddled
4.female on the rag with flogger
5.double team while eating out a woman with a yeast infection
6.dead female horse
7.female dog in heat
8. a mix of dog shit from the kennel and horse shit from the stables.  They are made to kneel on all fours to eat the shit and when they aren't looking they bring the pig up to fuck her
9. eating out a female horse in estrus while fucked by stallion(for the last time through, parade all three strapped under horse while being fucked in cunt.
10. pit of rats
11. eat out old female dog with no control over bladder and bowels
12. lick and suck ass of old male dog with no control over bladder and bowels
13. eating out female pigs in slop pit
14. eating out female skunk
15. pit of leeches
16. Angie trapped! all her weight on her tits – bitchpup takes her place and whipped based on number of leeches
17. eating the shit of a worm ridden dog
18. tit containers with mosquitos.
19. inflatable gag covered in honey and biting ants (can't remove until they reach this point again)
20. Brittany removes the "bras" and wearing vampire gloves kneads their breasts
22. electrified nipple clamps, electrified clit clamps electified dog collar
23. pool filled with baby electric eels
24. violet wand torture                                             
25. electric, cooled dildo stool on first time and torture bike on the second.                                                               
26. a mat of randomly electrified pins they have to stand on and drink water until they piss on it.
27. electrical tit torture-long thin needles that need to be inserted
28. Aminda made to fuck Lisa with electrified dildo and deepthroat trainer
29. triple team by dommes with electrified dildos
30. electric chair
31. puss caterpillar panties (cannot remove) The puss caterpillar (Flannel Moth larvae) is one of more than 50 types of caterpillars found in the U. S. that are capable of stinging. Of these, the puss caterpillar is considered to be near the top of the list in terms of the severity of its sting. 
The larval stage of this insect is a small, wooly, pussycat-appearing caterpillar covered with rows of long spines that look like fine, soft, cuddly hairs. Because they appear to be small, innocuous pieces of fluff, children and adults alike are led to pick them up and play with them, usually with immediate, extremely painful results. The spines, hidden among the hairs, are hollow, and release a toxin of unknown chemical composition that produces a skin lesion. The lesion usually begins as a halo of reddened skin surrounding the sting site. This is soon followed by the appearance of a number of small cysts that gradually develop into a matrix of blood-filled lesions where the mass of spines punctured the skin. This clinical presentation is characteristic enough, generally, to permit physicians to make a diagnosis of the cause even in the absence of the caterpillar.

32. tit container filled with blister beetles.  blister beetles bodies contain a toxin (cantharadin) that can cause blisters to form on the skin.  Handling blister beetles can cause blisters on the skin as a reaction to cantharadin. Sometimes cantharidin is swallowed. The toxin is readily absorbed from the intestine and excreted in the urine. If cantharidin is swallowed to arouse sexual appetite, in an attempted suicide, by accident, with criminal intent or to induce abortion, several symptoms may occur depending on the dose. The initial discomfort begins within 30 minutes. Dysphagia as a result of mucositis with irritation of oral, oesophageal and gastric mucosa is followed by abdominal pain, nausea and vomiting, possibly with blood. Oedema, bleeding and necrosis of the mucosa occur at an early stage. There is intense congestion of the genito-urinary tract, with bleeding in the renal pyelum, ureters and bladder. Bleeding can also occur in the ovaries. Sometimes there is internal bleeding and bruising. Priapism occurs, which was the origin of the use of the substance as an aphrodisiac
33. stinging nettle whip
34. long snake pit.

Final - End in deep pit of sewage and liquefied waste of dead animals, kennel and barn shit etc. 

[Emma]

What a fucking fantastic mind you have.  I always get sucked into a vaccuum when i start reading bits and parts of your story... some parts just need to be read over and over again...*drool*

[John_F_Drake]

This will probably help when I sit down and read the story.

Thanks for the visuals.

[mothbrad]

Redlegtiger, just had to comment here - I've known about the Karen and Michelle story for a long time (obviously - hard for anyone around here not to know about it  ;) ), but I just haven't had the time in the past to read it properly - in other words, I've skimmed it, but didn't get the chance to really absorb it.  I don't like commenting on things I've only skimmed, so I left it.  I had to say that it's definitely one of my favourite ever stories, and I really enjoy lots of aspects of it.  I'm not usually into the 'slaver' thing (more into torture, myself), but there were lots of buttons pressed.  Thanks for the massive effort (and I know, as a 'writer' myself, how much effort goes into that much writing!), and please keep it up.

[redlegtiger]

Thanks mothbrad,

Coming from a fellow author I really appreciate the comment.  Feel free to make suggestions as to things you would like to see.  I plan on starting up on part 3 here pretty soon.  I've already finished part 2 and will be posting the others when I finish editing them.  Part 3 will be about Sarah taking charge of Karen and the bitchpups among other things.  It will be set mostly in a public high school setting and of course the estate.  I plan on tying up some loose ends and introduce a few new characters.

redlegtiger

[T2]

I've been following your story for a while now, and I just wanted to say that its the best story that I have every read!!  I can't wait to see what your have instore for Karen in part 3.  Good luck in you hunt for an illustrator.  I hope you can find one becuase I think that illustratation would enhanced you story ten fold.  I only wish I could draw!!
Keeping writing your great story!!!!!!!!!

T2   

[redlegtiger]

Thanks T2.  My efforts have slowed a bit on Part 3 though chapter 69 will be coming soon.  We get a little history lesson about how Brittany became the bitch she was.  I do enjoy hearing how you and the other fans like the story.  Please feel free to post story ideas here.  As I've said before, the setting for part 3 is going to be a regular public high school and the estate.  Though there will be some diversions.  I would love to hear some suggestions about how Sarah makes the bitchpups to entrap and blackmail the leaders of the student body into caving in to her will.  It was hinted at the beginning of the story that Sarah was a bitchy troublemaker that had been kicked out of all of her previous schools.  Her good side that showed up when Karen went to rescue Michelle is about to go the way of the Do-Dos.  She will progressively become more and more demanding.  Especially after the events that are about to unfold in the near future.  Some major supporting cast from part 2 are about to run into a little trouble and Sarah will blame Karen.

[thedominthehat]

I also have been enjoying this story for a while. 

[mothbrad]

All I hope for is that the cruelty continues, and that the poor unsuspecting ladies get what's coming to them.  As for specifics ... I'll have to think more about it.

[redlegtiger]

For those of you waiting on the next chapter of Karen and Michelle, Chapter 73 will be up this weekend.  I promise a most humiliating episode that Karen/doggyslut perpetrates on the cheerleading coach, ordered by Sarah of course.  There is also a gang rape of a new character that has a tie in with a previous character but will leave it for you to read the chapter to discover who it is and what their relationship is.  The end of the story is beginning to take shape and have almost finished setting things up for the end.  I hope that you will enjoy the many twists and turns as well as the surprise ending that is yet to come.  I hope you enjoy the ride.

[Emma]

Awesome!! im waiting, im waiting, im waiting!

You are inspirational!

and a little something to warm the heart while I'm here.  Ale and I were fucking the other day and i was so close to cumming but i couldn't quite get there and he stopped and knelt down and started licking my cunt which is always a nice thing but i was still struggling to go over that edge and our dog heard something and she started barking like crazy and well... i have a lot of dog thoughts.. Not about my cute labradoodle but the barking sent my mind to a nice place and i had the most earth shattering orgasm... and well.. i just thought I'd share that since you and your stories often provide some amazing fodder for some wonderful mental wandering....