Jade's Story

[redlegtiger]

This is the thread to make comments about Jade's Story.  For your information, the character Jade is based on a real person.  She wanted a fantasy written about her being raped by her father with her mother being complicit but not actually participating.  She then wanted to be rescued by yours truly thinking that I would free her from her miserable life only to find out she jumped from the frying pan into the fire.  This story is the result.  I would love to hear comments from you about how you like the story.  If you think I should continue the story etc.  I look forward to your comments.

[StephanePare]

Where can i find this story?  On bdsm library and your google groups it does not seem to be there yet.

[Sprayman]

Jade's story can be found on menu 31 of RPP Stories. Here's the link.

http://www.rppstories.com/members/1tales/assets31/s1934.html

[redlegtiger]

Thanks for the assist Sprayman.  You saved me from having to look up the directory.  RPP is the only site that this story is posted in.  I have no plans at this time to post it anywhere else.  If you read it and enjoy it, please come back here and post your thoughts.  I don't plan on continuing the story at this point but if I get enough feedback, I will continue it.

[Sprayman]

Happy to help Red.

[StephanePare]

thanks, that tiped me off to there having more to this website than the free forums, i took a subscription just to get your story, i will begin reading tonight and add my feedback here.

[redlegtiger]

Hope you enjoy the story Stephane.

[StephanePare]

It's very well written.  It feels kinda soft after coming off your karen & michelle story, but it's still very good.  I like that you're one of the few who understand good syntax and grammar can not only make a story easier to read, but enhance it as well.  A followup would be highly appreciated if you ever feel like writing it.

[redlegtiger]

After I finish with Karen and Michelle and Cynthia I will consider a continuation